Monday, June 8, 2015

Around Pinehill senses writing KM



One spring afternoon, I was walking around the playground. There was a faint breeze and I heard it whispering my name. Then it stopped. I felt it fly past my legs as if it was a rocket. Then I smelt the strong smell of freshly mowed grass swirling round my nose and I could see the breeze blow someone’s hat right off their head.

Blue - simple. Green - compound.

2 comments:

  1. Keeara I really like your writing

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  2. well done Keeara
    I like this part
    One spring afternoon, I was walking around the playground. There was a faint breeze and I heard it whispering my name.
    I also really like your background too it's so relaxing and soothing

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