Card One.
School bus.
I can see-A big yellow school bus.
I can smell-perfume that she’s wearing, the buses steam/fumes.
I can hear-the bus braking.
I can taste-the wind cold on my tongue.
I can feel-the wind gently smacking my face, my mum’s t-shirt.
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Card Two.
Rock climbing.
I can see-a huge rock/boulder, a tree.
I can smell-fresh wind, dusty rocks.
I can hear-the rocks falling behind me, the wind roaring.
I can taste-the dirt from the rocks.
I can feel-the cold rock under my hands.
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Card Three.
Desert.
I can see-huge pyramids on the hot sand.
I can smell-golden sand, burning sun.
I can hear-local egyptians yelling to their camels to follow them.
I can taste-Camels hair
I can feel-the Camels humpy back, the sun shining on my face.
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Card One
As I waited for the bus doors to open, I hugged my mum goodbye. I was as excited as a kid’s first birthday party. My first day at school. My mum’s perfume was like roses to my nose. I could feel her nice warm, soft t-shirt against my cool face. I was excited and nervous. I had to make new friends. Make good choices around people and know what to do and how to do it. I got on the bus. I waved goodbye as hard as a door one last time to my mum and then I was off. As soon as the bus came to a crawl, I hopped off.
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Wednesday, May 20, 2015
Keeara's Brainstorming Cards
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i really like your story and there is really nothing for you to improve on
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